"Aajkal badee baatein hone lagee hain duneeya waalon se" he said
She looked at him, said nothing
"Syaapa! chal chai peetein hain"
They walked down to the roadside tapri and ordered two glasses of cutting chai
"Sutta share karna hai?"
She nodded a no
"Tujhe pata hai tu bahut bolta hai" she finally said
"Naee boloon kya?"
A no again
"Tu jab bolta hai, achcha lagta hai"
"Aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai?"
"Tu waapas chal, tujhe pyaar dikhaati hoon"
He grinned
She grinned
The chai waalla couldn't help but grin
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Me neither! *grinning*
and me grins too!
Grinning load and clear!!!! ;)
dat was tapori in love.... nice short stories u r comin up with.... would have been better if she would have shared da sutta!! ;)
keep writting girish.....good work again.
grin grin grin :D
veru cute
hmm u sure that chai wala didn't drug her tea or something??
she sounds prety high :p
heheh...thats very romantic...
Sparkling, AD, Srushti, Siras... keep grinning along :)
Sonali, yes, sometimes love, gotta b very non classy, gotta b done tapori ishtyle :)
rookie :)
pri...dunno, maybe he did ;)
Sophia...yes fiction allows us to take the heartbreaks of real life...and transform it into smiles of the readers :)
"Tu waapas chal, tujhe pyaar dikhaati hoon"
lol.
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